This story poses a petitio principii fallacy - it implicated drama just because. It would be more effective if made shorter, for some frames are senseless (I may say) scenes. On the other hand, it is well crafted with varying techniques to execute the fiction story. It enables the viewers to fully understand the meaning of being connected with someone despite the distance and unawareness. That, because of the proper editing style - it could actually carry the whole story.